write a letter to your friend to tell him/het about the plant of your trip

Dear Jack ,
How are you? Thank you for your wonderful gift. I think you got an enjoyable summer holiday. And I would like to tell you about my last summer holiday.
I spent my summer holiday with my family in Da Nang for 3 days. That was really great days for me. On the first day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was very fresh, it made me feel good. We visited many places such as Fantasy Park, Debay Cellar, French Village, etc.
On the second day, we went to visit My Son Sanctuary and go swimming in the afternoon. Da Nang beach is very pure and the scene is really beautiful. So I took many nice pictures.
And on the last day, we just walked around the town, enjoy some delicious dishes of Da Nang such as bun Quang, banh trang thit heo, etc and bought some souvenirs. I have a great gift for you. I will send your gift and the beautiful pictures that I took for you.
I really had a great time with my family. Da Nang is a wonderful place and people in here are friendly. I think this is a place I shall never forget. So how is your summer vacation? Write to me and tell me about it.
Elsa
Please check it for me. Thank you.

Dear Linh !

The city in the early morning is very clear and cool. On the road, people and vehicles are still sparse. Out of town, the car turns to Highway I and starts to accelerate. I sat on a chair near the window so I was spoiled for watching the scenery on both sides of the road Soon, the car reached the junction to Da Lat. From here, Highway 20 curves between a green color of successive rubber forests.
The scenery is different from time to time. The car goes uphill, down the pass continuously. There are passes that are very high and tens of kilometers long. He drove calmly and deftly drove through the steep and dangerous roads, one side was high mountains, the other was a deep abyss. Passengers seem very reassured, completely relying on his proficient steering wheel. Some people rest their heads on the sides of good night chairs.
At three o'clock in the afternoon, the car reached the territory of Liverpool city, a famous tourist destination in the country. From a distance, I saw the hills connecting after another. The driver stops for visitors to admire the beauty of Pren waterfall. Water poured down from above like a giant white curtain. The sound of the waterfall is steady, millions of tiny water dust shines.

Dad took many pictures for me. My favorite is the way to ride a horse on top of a hill, under an old pine tree. Arriving at the city park, she happily held the shoulder of a giant stuffed black bear near the gate for her to take pictures. I love watching birds, watching animals, watching flowers forget all the time.

Best friend,

Hoai Anh