write a paragraph about your favourite music

My favorite kind of music is pop. Actually, i like all kinds of music. but the most favorite part is pop. That is because most people listen to music. Pop music is the most common music around us. It has a good point, we can listen to it easily, and we find it simple. Those reasons make me interested, so I like pop music. My favorite pop musician is Justin Timberlake. He was one of the members in a teen pop group. But now he has a solo album. His songs are dance music but i like his voice and dance. I support the idea that a singer's voice is an important point in pop music. When I choose a song, I focus on the singer's voice style. also in my iPOD I have lots of songs; nearly all lists are pop music, but most of them are Korean pop music

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Hello!My name is Mary.Pop is my favorite music, and I like it for some reasons. Firstly, it 
relieves stress. Whenever I feel down or tired, I usually listen to pop music to relax or fall
asleep. Then, my feelings actually become better. Secondly, music helps me to make
friends. In my university, I have found many new friends who have the same passion for
music. When we have free time, we usually talk about a song and sing it together. As a
result, the number of my friends is increasing significantly. Finally, music also helps me
to work more effectively. It is true that I am very lazy of cleaning my room, but when I
listen to a pop song, I do very well and fast. In brief, music is an important part of my
life. It brings many changes to me, so I see music as a friend of me

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