MN COI SỬA NGỮ PHÁP, CHÍNH TẢ GIÚP EM VỚI Á J MAI E KT GIỮA KÌ Á HELP ME Hello, I’m PTKD, my number is 5 Today, I want to tell you something about my future job Well, which jobs do you think that I want to do in the future when I’m a student in this class? Doctor? Dentist? Pharmacist? My answer is: NO. I’m really want to be a programmer in the future for 3 main reasons: Firstly, I love the codes. When I was a small boy, every time I watched Vietnam Robocon or ABU Robocon Contest, I always dreamt to be a contestant to create fast and flexible robots and win the trophy. When I was a junior high school student, I learnt some programming languages like normal Pascal, Arduino Pascal, Arduino CPP (C++), C, TronZ - Card, Scratch and joined some contests (Of course, I won some prizes, but….. I’m still waiting for my chance to get a trophy). Every time I’m coding, I see the beauty of the lines of code, like the loop code, one or two-dimensional arrays code or the complex consts and vars. And the more complex the codes are, the more excited I am. I can use hours to rewrite the codes everyday to find out how they work or create some new code to solve my problem if I want. Marc Anthony said, “If you do what you love, you’ll never work a day in your life”. And I’m lazy, I don’t want to work. So you know what I mean. Second, in my opinion, Automatic robots and AI will replace lots of jobs in future. Doctors can be replaced by AI, pharmacists can be replaced by AI, dentists can be replaced by Automatic robots and many other jobs can be replaced, too. But for the creators of AI and robots, they CANNOT be replaced by what they made. The last one, the IT jobs, such as programmer, security engineer, database administrator or video game producer, are the well paid jobs. And the one I love most? I’m an absolute programmer. Thanks for listening to my presentation.

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Hello, I’m PTKD, my number is 5 Today, I want to tell you something about my future job Well, which jobs do you think that I want to do in the future when I’m a student in this class? Doctor? Dentist? Pharmacist? My answer is: NO. I’m really want to be a programmer in the future for 3 main reasons: Firstly, I love the codes. When I was a small boy, every time I watched Vietnam Robocon or ABU Robocon Contest, I always dreamt to be a contestant to create fast and flexible robots and win the trophy. When I was a junior high school student, I learnt some programming languages like normal Pascal, Arduino Pascal, Arduino CPP (C++), C, TronZ - Card, Scratch and joined some contests (Of course, I won some prizes, but….. I’m still waiting for my chance to get a trophy). Every time I’m coding, I see the beauty of the lines of code, like the loop code, one or two-dimensional arrays code or the complex consts and vars. And the more complex the codes are, the more excited I am. I can use hours to rewrite the codes everyday to find out how they work or create some new code to solve my problem if I want. Marc Anthony said, “If you do what you love, you’ll never work a day in your life”. And I’m lazy, I don’t want to work. So you know what I mean. Second, in my opinion, Automatic robots and AI will replace lots of jobs in future. Doctors can be replaced by AI, pharmacists can be replaced by AI, dentists can be replaced by Automatic robots and many other jobs can be replaced, too. But for the creators of AI and robots, they CANNOT be replaced by what they made. The last one, the IT jobs, such as programmer, security engineer, database administrator or video game producer, are the well paid jobs. And the one I love most? I’m an absolute programmer. Thanks for listening to my presentation.

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Hello, I’m PTKD, my number is 5 Today, I want to tell you something about my future job Well, which jobs do you think that I want to do in the future when I’m a student in this class? Doctor? Dentist? Pharmacist? My answer is: NO. I’m really want to be a programmer in the future for 3 main reasons: Firstly, I love the codes. When I was a small boy, every time I watched Vietnam Robocon or ABU Robocon Contest, I always dreamt to be a contestant to create fast and flexible robots and win the trophy. When I was a junior high school student, I learned some programming languages like normal Pascal, Arduino Pascal, Arduino CPP (C++), C, TronZ - Card, Scratch and joined some contests (Of course, I won some prizes, but….. I’m still waiting for my chance to get a trophy). Every time I’m coding, I see the beauty of the lines of code, like the loop code, one or two-dimensional arrays code, or the complex consts and vars. And the more complex the codes are, the more excited I am. I can use hours to rewrite the codes every day to find out how they work or create some new code to solve my problem if I want. Marc Anthony said, “If you do what you love, you’ll never work a day in your life”. And I’m lazy, I don’t want to work. So you know what I mean. Second, in my opinion, Automatic robots and AI will replace lots of jobs in the future. Doctors can be replaced by AI, pharmacists can be replaced by AI, dentists can be replaced by Automatic robots and many other jobs can be replaced, too. But for the creators of AI and robots, they CANNOT be replaced by what they made. The last one, the IT jobs, such as programmer, security engineer, database administrator, or video game producer, are the well-paid jobs. And the one I love most? I’m an absolute programmer. Thanks for listening to my presentation.

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Hello, I’m PTKD, my number is 5 Today, I want to tell you something about my future job Well, which jobs do you think that I want to do in the future when I’m a student in this class? Doctor? Dentist? Pharmacist? My answer is: NO. I’m want to be a programmer in the future for 3 main reasons: Firstly, I love the codes. When I was a small boy, every time I watched Vietnam Robocon or ABU Robocon Contest, I always dreamt to be a contestant to create fast and flexible robots and win the trophy. When I was a junior high school student, I learnt some programming languages like normal Pascal, Arduino Pascal, Arduino CPP (C++), C, TronZ - Card, Scratch and joined some contests (Of course, I won some prizes, but….. I’m still waiting for my chance to get a trophy). Every time I’m coding, I see the beauty of the lines of code, like the loop code, one or two-dimensional arrays code or the complex consts and vars. And the more complex the codes are, the more excited I am. I can use hours to rewrite the codes every day to find out how they work or create some new code to solve my problem if I want. Marc Anthony said, “If you do what you love, you’ll never work a day in your life”. And I’m lazy, I don’t want to work. So you know what I mean. Second, in my opinion, Automatic robots and AI will replace lots of jobs in future. Doctors can be replaced by AI, pharmacists can be replaced by AI, dentists can be replaced by Automatic robots and many other jobs can be replaced, too. But for the creators of AI and robots, they CANNOT be replaced by what they made. The last one, the IT jobs, such as programmer, security engineer, database administrator or video game producer, are the well-paid jobs. And the one I love most? I’m an absolute programmer. Thanks for listening to my presentation.