"What are the benefits of mobile phones in your life?"

Here is a sample writing. Find out all the mistakes in each sentence to complete the passage.

In the age of advanced technology, the mobile phone is one of the most widely used technologies and it plays an important role in our lives. The mobile phone will certainly bring about a lot of advantages. First of all, the cell phone is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, hence we can contact easily with our friends and our relatives whenever by calling or sending messages. Second, it is also a means of entertainment for people. For instance, we can listen to music and play games on mobile phones. Moreover, by using the latest apps for smartphones, we can access to the Internet to watch films, check out profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. Finally, if we have a smartphone in hand, our studying will become more effective such as looking up dictionary, finding out many sources of reference on the Internet. 

In conclusion,

it could be said that

mobile phone is an indispensable part

in our life.

However,

we should know

how to use it properly

so that

it will not

have bad effects in

our study.