Dear Sir/ Madam, 1. I / like/ express/ concern/ increasing/number/Karaoke bars/city. => 2. There /be/lot/reasons/I/object/places. => 3.Firstly/owners/take/much money/those/come/sing. ==> 4.Secondly,they/cause/much noise/neighborhood => 5. Thirdly, there/number/pupils/play truant/just/go/those/places/sing => 6.Last/least/these bars/do harm/appearance/city/because/their/ugly flashing lights => 7.I/want/say/I/not/old fashioned/ person => 8. I / hope/authority/take/matter/careful consideration. => 9. I/ not mean/ban/them/but/there/should/effective way control/this kind/entertainment places => 10. I/look/see/city council/do/this matter =>

1) I would like to express my concern about an increasing number of karaoke bars in the city

2) There are a lot of reasons that I object to these places

3) Firstly, the owners take too much money from those who come to sing

4) Secondly, they cause too much noise to the neighborhood

5) Thirdly, there are a number of pupils who play truant just to go to those places to sing

6) Last but not least, these bars do harm to the appearance of this city because of their too ugly flashing lights

7) I want to say I am not an old-fashioned person

8) I hope the authority will taker this matter into careful consideration

9) I do not mean to ban them but there should be an effective way to control this kind of entertainment places

10) I look forward to seeing the city council do something about this matter

1., I would like to express my concern about an increasing number of karaoke bars in the city.

2. There are a lot of reasons that I object to these places

3. Firstly, the owners take too much money from those who come / coming to sing.

4. Secondly, they cause too much noise to the neighborhood.

5. Thirdly, there are a number of pupils who play / playing truant just to go to those places to sing.

6. Last but not least, these bars do harm to the appearance of the / this city because of their too ugly flashing lights.

7. I want to say I am not an old-fashioned person.

8. I hope the authority will taker the / this matter into careful consideration.

9. I do not mean to ban them but there should be an effective way to control this kind of entertainment places.

10. I look forward to seeing the city council do something about this matter.