CHo em xin dàn ý thôi ạ!! Friends have more influence than family on teenager. Discuss. What do you think about that? Tell me your opinion

A lot of people would say that friends have more influence than family on teenagers. Some believe that family is the most important. Different people have different angles of thoughts.

Teenagers are surely influenced by their family a lot, since they know them their whole life. But teenagers usually do not listen to their parents, they go out with friends, they meet new people and try new things. They can be influenced in negative ways, which are smoking, missing from school, alcohol and even drugs. Usually, if parents do not have time for their teenager or ignore them, they are more likely to get into dangerous society and end up being influenced by friends.

On the other hand, friends can have very postive influence, for example, they can motivate you to study, they can show you new hobbies and so on.

My view is that it depends on everyone's personallity if they want to be influenced more by friends or family. I am not really influenced by friends, I just form my own opinions and stuff. Everyone is different.

I think friends have more influence but sometimes it depends on family and society how they will be influenced because not all the teenagers are the same.



(Our teacher wanted it to be 150-180 words, I think that it is very few...originally it should be about 200 words, this is 206, maybe you could help me to shorten it?)