Best english giúp mình cần sửa gì không ạ. Đề: Describe a family member. I’ve chosen to talk about my mother who is an important part of my life. She is now 47 years old and she lives with my family as a housewife. She has a medium height, about 163 cm and she weight about 58kg. I think it’s a fit body. For me, my mother is so beautiful, she looks pretty younger than her age with short-wavy hair and bangs. She likes clothes, especially cosy long dresses. She always looks pretty whenever she goes out. In her spare time, she’d like to cook, watch TV or meet her friends. My mom likes pork, bean-sprouts and cola and she doesn’t like giblets and sweeties. My mother is really kind and a little straightforward. She usually wants to show her opinions about things to people. Anyways, she’s a caring person. She does almost housework and always takes care of my family. I feel warmly whenever i stay with her. So, if I had to talk about a person who i love most, it would have to be my mother. Cảm ơn nhiều ạ ^^

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The person I love the most in my family is my mother.

I’ve chosen to talk about my mother who is an important part → person of my life. She is now 47 years old and she lives with my family as → is a housewife. She has a medium height, about 163 cm and she weight about 58kg. I think it’s a fit body. For me, my mother is so beautiful, she looks pretty → Ф younger than her age with short-wavy hair and bangs. She likes clothes, especially cosy long dresses. She always looks pretty whenever she goes out. In her spare time, she’d like to cook, watch TV or meet her friends. My mom likes pork, bean-sprouts and cola and → Ф but she doesn’t like giblets and sweeties. My mother is really kind and a little straightforward. She usually wants to show her opinions about things to people. Anyways, she’s a caring person. She does almost the housework and always takes care of my family. I feel warmly → warm whenever i stay with her. So, if I had to talk about a person who i love most, it would have to be my mother.

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I’ve chosen to talk about my mother who is an important person of my life. She is now 47 years old and she is a housewife. She has a medium height, about 163 cm and she weight about 58kg. I think it’s a fit body. For me, my mother is so beautiful, she looks younger than her age with short-wavy hair and bangs. She likes clothes, especially cosy long dresses. She always looks pretty whenever she goes out. In her spare time, she’d like to cook, watch TV or meet her friends. My mom likes pork, bean-sprouts and cola but she doesn’t like giblets and sweeties. My mother is really kind and a little straightforward. She usually wants to show her opinions about things to people. Anyways, she’s a caring person. She does almost the housework and always takes care of my family. I feel warm whenever i stay with her. So, if I had to talk about a person who i love most, it would have to be my mother.