My best friend , My , does not have healthy eating habits . She usually skips if she has to go to school . When she has it , she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favorite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think My should change her diet. Frist, she wants to have a healthy body every day , she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and excircise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body Giúp mik sửa vs cảm ơn mik sẽ đánh giá 5 sao

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My best friend, My, does not have healthy eating habits. She usually skips if she has to go to school. When she has it, she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favourite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think she/My should change her diet. Frist, she wants to have a healthy body every day, she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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My best friend , My , does not have healthy eating habits . She usually skips if she has to go to school . When she has it , she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favorite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think My should change her diet. Frist, she wants to have a healthy body every day , she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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My best friend, My, does not have healthy eating habits. She usually skips if she has to go to school. When she has it, she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favourite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think I should change her diet. First, she wants to have a healthy body every day, she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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I.  MULTIPLE CHOICE (8.0 points)

Mark the letter A, B, C, or D to indicate the word whose underlined part is pronounced differently front that of the rest in each of the following questions.

1. A. oceanic    B. remote    C. occasion    D. metro

2. A. festival    B. cultural    C. sculpture    D. virtual

Mark the letter A, B, C, or D to indicate the word that differs from the other three in the position of primary stress in each of the following questions.

3. A. external    B. determine    C. mysterious    D. customer

4. A. miraculous    B. individual    C. certificate    D. astronomy

Mark the letter A, B, C, or D to indicate the underlined part that needs correction in each of the following questions.

5. Now that the stress of examinations are over, we can go somewhere for our holiday.

                     A                     B                     C                     D

6. The English summer course will start in May 29th and finish in August.

                     A                     B                     C                     D

7. There were so a lot of people trying to leave the burning building that the police

             A                B             C

had a great deal of trouble controlling them.

                   D

Mark the letter A, B, C, or D to indicate the correct answer to each of the following questions.

8. The earthworm is a worm _______in moist, warm soil in many geographical areas.

    A. where is it found       B. is found

    C. and found it               D. which is found

9. Our flight from Amsterdam to London was delayed    the heavy fog.

    A. as a result     B. on account     C. instead of     D. due to

10. It is_______ to translate each lesson into your language. This is not a good way to study English.

    A. productive     B. unproductive     C. producing     D. unproducing

11. A good clock always keeps_______ time.

    A. certain    B. accurate    C. true    D. serious

12. It seems that the world record for this event is almost impossible to_______.

    A. meet    B. compare    C. beat    D. balance

13. The soldier was punished for_______ to obey his commanding officer's order.

    A. refusing    B. regretting    C. objecting    D. resisting

14. It is believed that she'll be a billionaire by the time she_______ forty.

    A. is    B. was    C. will be    D. would be

15. Some of the passengers spoke to reporters about their_______ in the burning bus.

    A. occasion    B. happening    C. event    D. experience

16. _______the rise in unemployment, people still seem to be spending more.

    A. Nevertheless    B. Meanwhile    C. Despite    D. Although

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