IELTS Taks 2: ( write an essay 150- 300 words) Some people believe that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. To what extent do you agree with this?

Money is one of the important necessities in human life, many people judge that money is as main determiner of human happiness. However, some people do not think so. Happiness is not able to be bought by money. As an individual, money is not every thing, many things influence the happiness.

All people use part of their life time to work for earning money to survive their life. They need many things in their life which need money to get them, because nothing free in the world, everything needs money. For instance, firstly, people comfortable house for living together with their family, it needs money. As we know that goods are more expensive day by day. Secondly,people need education to change their life to be smart, it needs money for tuition fee. Even though in Indonesia there is free education as government program, it is not free for all. The students need shoes, uniform, transportation, and other things. Because of them, some people measure the happiness by money as measurement.

In conclusion, though a grown-up man or woman takes some time to get on grips economically and attain a social status, it is all a part and parcel of life. In my opinion, the early stage of life, childhood should only be spent for having academic skills as well as pedagogic learning of basic expenses. But if the mother’s and father’s trust this method, the expenses are to be followed by them to borne fruitful results out of this.

Chúc bạn học tốt

Chào bạn, nếu bạn đang học Ielts mà gặp vấn đề khó ở Writing thì mình nghĩ bạn nên mua quyển

'' How to crack the Ielts Writting test vol1'' của thầy Tùng và cô Đặng Bích Phuơng. Bạn tham khảo ý kiến mình nhé !

Happiness has always been a crucial goal for every human. To many people, money plays a major role in contributing happiness. However, some others hold the view that money has no relation with happiness. From my viewpoint, the relationship between money and happiness is correlation not causation.

To begin with, money is the base for human to pursue their true happiness. Money is certainly needed in paying for anything from food, clothes to luxury accomodation. Thus, without money, one can hardly afford his basic needs to live a comfortable life. It, therefore, a reason why many people are depressed when they can not make money.

On the other hand, money is never be the only way to achieve happiness. It is undeniable that certain amount of money is essential to lead a life. However, there are different sources that help people feel happy. It can come from your beloved ones, your achievements, or even from your pets. In reality, not every rich people find their happiness. 

In conclusion, money and happiness is related but not causal. Happiness does increase when money increases. However, owning much money does not guarantee happiness.