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The topic of people's opinion of what high students wear to school has different angles due to its complexity. Some high schools seem to require all students to wear school uniforms while others tend to permit students to decide what to wear to school. In my opinion, I suggest students should decide what to wear to school for the following three reasons.

Firstly, wearing uniform shows independence. When high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school rather than require all of them to wear school uniform, it helps students make a decision about wearing by themselves.

Secondly, when students decide what they want to wear to school, they can develop their own sense of beauty. If students decide their everyday wearing to school, they can learn how to wear and know their preference about wearing gradually.

Finally, wearing what that want can help students feel comfortable. Wearing what I like to school can help me feel happy, and it also helps me study efficiently. Sometimes because uniforms are cheaper, they are often made from poor cloth which makes students feel uncomfortable.

In conclusion, I feel confident my opinion which students decide what to wear to school is better is built on a valid foundation.