mng giúp mk chữa lỗi bài này vs. Thanks ạ! Dear Grandma Honor, How are you? I miss you so much. Today, I gave a speech in front of my family, I told them how many continents in the world and how many countries in each continents . At first, I introduced myself to them  and what I would tell them. Curly translated what I say for them.Then I introduced to them about the continents in the world and how many countries in each continents .After that, I thanked them for listening. They gave me a lot of good advice about the structure of the speech and how to make the speech more interesting. My grandpa said I ought to add more few questions for the audience to make them feel excited and pay more attention on me. My aunt said that I was very confident, it was good. But I had to focus on the structure of my speech, like my grandpa said make the audience feel excited with my speech. She also said I had to use more right sentences and grammar. That was interested.  I have learned more experience about presentation skills. I'll  do it better next time.Love you , Grandma. Have a nice day !

Dear Grandma Honor, How are you? I miss you so much. Today, I gave a speech in front of my family, I told them how many continents in the world and how many countries on each continent. At first, I introduced myself to them and what I would tell them. Curly translated what I say for them. Then I introduced to them about the continents in the world and how many countries on each continent.After that, I thanked them for listening. They gave me a lot of good advice about the structure of the speech and how to make the speech more interesting. My grandpa said I ought to add more few questions for the audience to make them feel excited and pay more attention to me. My aunt said that I was very confident, it was good. But I had to focus on the structure of my speech, like my grandpa said to make the audience feel excited with my speech. She also said I had to use more right sentences and grammar. That was interested. I have learned more experience in presentation skills. I'll do it better next time. Love you, Grandma. Have a nice day!

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