IELTS WRITING TASK 2 -Write the advantages and disavantages of the 4.0 technology
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Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time.
Smartphones enable people to stay in touch, even over long distances, and they are relatively safe and reliable to use. There are devices that people can use to communicate with plus at the other end of the planet and getting and keeping in touch with other people is very easy.
The disadvantages of smartphone is that it means people no longer need to meet in person as much, and interpersonal relationships are suffering worldwide because people are communicating through a small handheld device. A lot of people have smartphones and they use them almost semi-continuously, including in public settings when they could be making new friends, finding new lovers, and interacting with their current friends.
The advantages of the internet are that people can communicate over vast distances and can gain access to information and get answers to their questions very quickly. The disadvantage is that the Internet isn’t moderated in the way that people think and lots of it is filled with misinformation and outright lies.
Even brand-named websites which have a lot of trust are not accountable for what appears on their own websites. Even respected and branded news sites have stories that have passed through many people’s hands and originally started as lies with zero accountability throughout the dissemination process.
In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial.
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The 4.0 technology has changed our life rapidly. If the 4.0 technology has 1000 advantages, it also has 100 disadvantages.
On the one hand, the 4.0 technology has expanded the entertainment industry. There was a time when for entertainment purposes, people used to rely on DVD and cassette players. Now people can watch movies on laptops and smartphones anywhere, anytime. Moreover, information is easily accessible. Information is a part of our lives nowadays. It is a kind of need that we humans need to survive. With the help of the 4.0 technology, we can now access information within seconds. In addition, it brings us lots of advantages in education. With the latest technology being introduced every day, we can now receive education sitting at home. Hundreds of online websites offer tutoring services and applications like skype can be useful if you want to study sitting at home.
On the other hand, the 4.0 technology has some negative aspects. First of all, it increased unemployment rates. More machines mean that the demand for labor and employees reduces increasing the unemployment rates of a country. Besides, it decreases creativity. As more and more machines are being introduced, human brains are getting wasted. People now rely on machines to carry out a job or any task which means that creativity is fading away. Brainstorming and critical thinking are history in some cases. Finally, it also decreases security. It is true that the 4.0 technology has increased the security but at the same time, it is to be blamed for the thefts happening around the globe. Our car, bank accounts, personal information, everything is somehow linked to the internet.
In conclusion, the 4.0 has both pros and cons; however, I strongly believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.