It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others, however, prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ko chép mạng nha mn

People have different opinions about living places. Certain people like to live in the country area while others choose to stay in the city centre. Each place offers its own benefits and drawbacks and the following essay will discuss them in detail.

On the one hand, a group of people prefer to live in the city centre because they believe that there are a lot of benefits living in the area. It is a fact that the city offers various kinds of facilities, such as shopping malls, universities, cinemas, hospitals and restaurants, therefore it would not be difficult for the city’s residents in finding education centres, foods or entertainments. Cities offer more job opportunities as most of the companies and industries are situated there. Apart from that, there are certain facilities that are present only in city areas like amusement parks, large shopping malls, better schools etc. However, living in the city has some negative sides as well. The common drawbacks are that the crime and air pollution rate in the city are commonly higher than the rural area. Therefore some people choose to move out of the city centre.


On the other hand, some people think that the best place to live is in the rural area. It is believed that people who live in these areas have a healthier life because they breathe fresher air, they eat more hygienic and natural fruits and vegetables and they live in a more relaxed and quite environment. As a result, their life expectancy is longer than those who live in cities or towns. Despite its positive sides, living in remote areas have some disadvantages. Several people found that the quality of education in these areas is left behind, while others feel that it is hard for them to develop their careers, therefore they choose to move to big cities.

In conclusion, living in the city or the countryside has its own positive and negative sides, and it depends on the preference of each individual. I personally choose to live in the city area to enhance my career and plan to live in the countryside when I retire.

+ We will analyze an example in the previous lesson to see that it is very important to choose the right ideas and group them appropriately.
Disadvantage of living and working in a big city
 - Densely populated, lack of space for entertainment activities
 -Noise pollution, emissions from vehicles and industrial waste
 -High living standards
 -The road is too crowded
 -Life is very stressful
 -Everyone has to work hard to secure the job
Analysis of reasonableness:

High standard of living: this is not an inconvenience when living in a big city because there is a high income source to compensate. Since wages in urban areas are often higher than in rural areas, you have to accept more expensive prices. Is there a place where wages are high but costs are low? Probably not..
Industrial waste: In fact, industrial parks are not located in big cities but in the suburbs, so this idea is not really reasonable.
Lack of space for recreational activities: there is a problem here.
First, who are the participants in entertainment? If you are a child, it is true that in urban areas there is a lack of natural spaces for children to play, but children are not the subject of the topic "living and working in a big city", so children should not be brought. into the essay
Second, if the audience is adults, there is no shortage of amusement parks in urban areas (ball courts, sports centers...) even more diverse and convenient than in rural areas, so this opinion is inconsequential
Analysis to group:

Overpopulation: overcrowding leads to traffic overload and also leads to environmental pollution (smoke, dust, noise)
The stressful life mainly stems from the fast pace of life, everyone has to work hard if they don't want to be fired (the level of competition in big cities is very high).
The rest of the ideas: not included for the reasons analyzed above
In fact, both environmental pollution and stressful life lead to a common consequence that is the quality of life and health of urban people decrease. And this has been proven by research.

So the outline for the body paragraph about the disadvantages of living in a big city would be:

Topic: Living and working in a big city has some disadvantages, especially negative effects on health and quality of life.
Main idea 1: Environmental pollution
Reasons why pollution: densely populated -> a lot of personal vehicles -> noise pollution, exhaust fumes
Gist 2: Life is stressful
Reasons for stress: competition at work -> always having to work hard and fear of losing your job -> stress -> psychological/mental disorders and a bunch of other problems that will arise as a result
No one can deny these two main ideas, so your article will be very convincing in content. The examples given are also very reasonable because everyone in the city is fed up with smoke, gasoline smell, dust, noise and no one has ever complained about the intensity of the work being too heavy.

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